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Dearest Love,

How do you decide who is chosen?
When lovers fall and fade away,
Is there a way you choose who stays?
Battered, bruised, and torn apart;
Feelings aren't always returned,
How do you elect those who recieve you, or do you?
Is there a way you select who's deserving?
Do you select who is "the one"?
Is there even one for me?
Is there a way to get though the pain
Of losing you... losing your company
In my every day life?
Do you simply play a game
To determine when you shall grace us
Or break us with your presence?
I cry because of you.
Long nights dedicated to the lover's game.
Tears for you are like no other.
I cry because you're gone and because you happened,
Are these simply waste?
Will you lighten my time here with your
Wonderfull dedication, or will I forever
Stray in the darkness of your absence?
Enlighten me with the way you work,
With the way you allow others to experience you;
Maybe, just maybe, I will find you again.

With Great Appreciation,
Samantha Jo




Samantha Jo, Darling,

Wasted, your tears are not.
Your heart is large and pure.
I do not choose to engulf you,
You simply allow me to live through you.
Your feelings, genuine and true, allow you
To experience me to the fullest.
Yes, there is "the one" for you, of course, my dear.
It's completely up to you, not to me, whether
You notice him for who he is.
When you find me, you will know.
When you endure me whole-heartedly,
You will never let go.
With this, my child, one thing for sure,
The feelings will completely be returned.
So mourn if you must for the now,
You will overcome this and eventually see
The one you have been waiting for is
Standing for all to realize but you.

With care, I am always here,
Love
©2005-2009 ~forlorn-angel
:iconforlorn-angel:

Author's Comments

This is one of many poetry assignments we are doing right now in my Senior Composition class. This is actually two peoms written in a letter format.

We were told to write a poem to anything, whether it be sun earth a rain/tear drop a person... i chose love... We were told to ask it questions and also explain a bit of ourselves to this 'unknown'and how this thing pertains to us... after i wrote TO love... i was informed that i was also supposed to write a reply from love to the questions that i had asked... this, my friends, was a bit more difficult.

I know this is long... i haven't written in a while. Please comment whether good or otherwise. Thank you!!!


Also... this is a bit more of a work in progress...

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:icondayzdfallenangel:
i like it...its sort of inspirational, and of course its a thing i question. but then again, i have a hard time believeing in it still. you did a great job and its truely phenominal!

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i hear you screaming,
i hear you cry out loud,
now i know your secrets,
now i see you drown
:iconforlorn-angel:
thank you, doll... i appreciate you kind words very much

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:heart:

"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you into something else is the greatest accomplishment."

"...To know that even one life has breathed easier because I have lived. This is to have succeeded."

-Ralph Waldo Emerso
:iconmourningstar02:
Beautifu job Samee, you captured the emotion so well.
:clap:

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:+fav: Dare To Dream... :+fav:
I hate every beautiful day
:iconforlorn-angel:
much appreciate, love!

--
:heart:

"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you into something else is the greatest accomplishment."

"...To know that even one life has breathed easier because I have lived. This is to have succeeded."

-Ralph Waldo Emerso
:iconsassy-shiznit:
Samee Jo ~ This is by far one of the most powerful pieces of literature to have ever graced your pencil. This is amazing and truly emotional. Every living soul that have ever been graced by the presence of love knows and understands. I find your poem so comforting.... It eases the heart from the pressure we put on it day in and day out. I give you a standing ovation on this one! :wow: :clap:

AMAZING!!!! :hug:

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If you alway do what you've always done, you will always be where you've always been ~ Anon

:confused: :nana: :O_o:
:iconforlorn-angel:
wow... :bow: thank you! it just... overwhelmed me... with all the questions of life... i think that love is the most sought out for answers... i dunno... thank you immensely for your input. i love you

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:heart:

"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you into something else is the greatest accomplishment."

"...To know that even one life has breathed easier because I have lived. This is to have succeeded."

-Ralph Waldo Emerso
:iconsassy-shiznit:
Love leads to all emotions..... Love is the master of them all. I firmly feel that as long as you believe in love and follow its "truest" form....love will follow you.....:hug: I also think you should share that with Grandma. She will love it!

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If you alway do what you've always done, you will always be where you've always been ~ Anon

:confused: :nana: :O_o:
:iconforlorn-angel:
Maybe i will... i'm not sure... i'm hesitant... but perhaps.

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:heart:

"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you into something else is the greatest accomplishment."

"...To know that even one life has breathed easier because I have lived. This is to have succeeded."

-Ralph Waldo Emerso
:icondayzdfallenangel:
they're not just kind words, i mean them....no problem

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i hear you screaming,
i hear you cry out loud,
now i know your secrets,
now i see you drown

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